My chunk writing

This term we have been doing chunks of short films this is one of mine.

Chunk 1 

29:47

Metaphor

Oxymoron

Prefix or Suffix 

One man band

Slowly the curtains opened and Mr Bass started playing his instruments. Mr bass was excited. But There  was no one to be seen then this little old lady trotted along the old dusty tiles. and Mr bass started playing louder and louder and louder then. She went  to put here money in Mr bass can then Mr treble started to play the violin. Then tip walked up to Mr treble can and went to put the money in and Mr bass played louder and they fought for the money and then tip stole a violin for Mr treble and started playing and this man came and gave her money then she teased them. And Thur the money in the fountain . Thank you for reading.  

My fantastic persuasive writing.

 Why dogs are the

Best pets. 

When it comes to pets, it is without a doubt that dogs

most certainly make the best pets. Dogs are loyal,

affectionate and active animals, making them perfect

pets for children.

Firstly, everyone knows that dogs are the most loyal

of pets. They will sit with you when you are sick, they

love to spend time with you, play with you and they

will guard your house.

Secondly, it is widely known that dogs are affectionate.

Dogs like to be hugged, petted and rubbed by their

owners. Dogs also excitedly greet you when you come

home - no other pet will run, jump up and hug you as

soon as you walk through the door!

Finally, dogs are active animals. They require regular

walking which means that children who walk their

dogs will also get regular exercise. Dogs love to play

fetch which is also a great outdoor activity.

In conclusion, there is no question that dogs make the

best pet for children. This is because of their loyalty,

their affectionate nature and their active lifestyle. Do

yourself a favor and buy a dog today!

thank you for reading.