Target writing

In target writing this week we learnt to use different sentience types to describe photos. Here aresome ofmy sentences:

The pa is in kaiapoi.

This pa is big!

Why did they build this in Kaiapoi ??

                          

This is the super blood moon.

Why was the moon red ??

Go to the moon.

The moon is so big.

 

This is the Christchurch floods.

There is a very big flood!!

Why is this flooding??

Don't drive over the bridge.
 

what other sentience types could i use ?? 

Sentence Expansion

This week is bullying free week, so we will use that context to practise our ability to expand sentences.

Oscar cried 

When: last night. 

Where: at his house. 

Why: because his mum told him to get off the PlayStation.

Oscar cried last night at his house because his mum told him to get off the PlayStation. 

They had an argument 

When: 2 hours ago 

Where: at there house 

Why:they had an argument because there son raged and punched the wall

what do you think about Sentence Expansion ??